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[作文号:2935031] 【批改网杯】Huawei Breakthrough(2023-10-17)
要求:Smartphones are the most commonly used smart devices, but who has really realized that behind smartphones lies a high-risk technological competition between big countries? China's semiconductors, from software operating systems to hardware chips and chip manufacturing equipment, have been jointly sanctioned in the past few years by the West, especially against Huawei. Because its 5G chip is banned from OEM and many key components are limited in procurement, Huawei's mobile phone sales fell from 240 million to less than 30 million. As a result, Huawei, a leading enterprise of the 5G era, could only be forced to purchase 4G chips to maintain its mobile phone business.However, this great industry giant has never dropped out. On August 29, 2023, after more than 1,500 days of sanctions, Huawei unexpectedly released the Mate 60 Pro mobile phone that supports the 5G network. It was the world's first smartphone enabling satellite calls and also used Huawei's Kirin 9000s chip with a localization rate of more than 90%, thus triggering a buying frenzy in China. Flying in the face of the superpower crackdown on advanced technology, Huawei has fully demonstrated its resilience and courage, overcoming incredible difficulties, achieving brilliant breakthroughs, and causing a great sensation. This will surely exert a profound impact on the world semiconductor industry in the future. As such a miracle, which we could call the "Huawei Breakthrough," suggests, when confronted with difficulties and pressures, only with unremitting self-improvement and firm unity of all the forces that can be united can we survive difficulties and hardships.Please compose an argumentative essay of 300-800 words focusing on the unique phenomenon of the "Huawei Breakthrough" and its impact on your rethinking of personal life and success. You can support your argument with reasons based on your personal experiences and valid evidence.参考译文:智能手机是我们最常使用的智能设备,但谁能真正意识到,在智能手机的背后,是大国之间高风险的技术竞争呢?中国半导体,从软件操作系统到硬件芯片再到制造芯片的设备,在过去的几年里受到美西方国家联手制裁,尤以华为为甚。因5G芯片被禁止代工,众多零部件采购受限,华为手机年销量从2.4亿部跌至不足3000万部。作为5G时代的领先企业,华为只能被迫采购4G芯片以维持手机业务。但是,华为并没有放弃,在历经1500多天的制裁后,2023年8月29日,华为出其不意地发布了Mate 60 Pro手机,该手机支持5G网络,是全球首款支持卫星通话的智能手机。Mate 60 Pro手机采用了华为自研的麒麟9000s芯片,国产化率超过90%,在国内引发了抢购狂潮。面对超级强权的打压,华为充分展示了其韧性和勇气,克服了难以置信的困难,成功实现突围,引起巨大轰动,未来将对世界半导体行业产生深远的影响。    华为的突围经历告诉我们,面对困难和压力,唯有自强不息,团结一切可以团结的力量,才能战胜艰难困苦。结合上述材料,请写一篇300-800字的文章,围绕“华为的突围”思考其对个人有哪些启示。你可以根据个人经验和有效的证据来阐释相关论点和理由。
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截止日期:2023-11-20
答题人数:75
[作文号:2922340] My First Day of College(2023-09-27)
要求:Writing a narrative essaywith no less than 150words.
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截止日期:2023-10-06
答题人数:85
[作文号:2866233] 【四级周周练】Are people becoming addicted to technology(2023-05-05)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on are people becoming addicted to technology. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 
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截止日期:2023-05-21
答题人数:44
[作文号:2848518] 【百万同题】大学组(2023-04-13)
要求:In 2023, the most popular TV series "The Knockout (狂飙, Kuangbiao)" made Zhang Songwen a model for good acting. After years of practicing his craft, he accumulated enough skill and finally gained recognition from the public in his 47th year. His life story is touching: he was rejected over 800 times in three years before becoming famous in China. He is indifferent to fame and fortune, and has refused many performance invitations due to disagreements with his partners on role interpretation or script quality.For ordinary people like us, we can also gain a lot of inspiration from Zhang Songwen's experience. Many people are afraid of rejection and failure, but in fact, everyone will go through this process. The key is to persistently pursue our own dreams and never give up. At the same time, we should pay attention to our inner selves and not lose our principles and conscience for fame and fortune. Please write a 300–800-word commentary on the unique phenomenon of "two-way rejection" experienced by Zhang Songwen. You can explain your argument and reasons based on your personal experience and please give a valid argument to show this compare and contrast with this Chinese Hero.参考译文:2023年最爆火的电视剧《狂飙》的热播,使得张颂文成为了一个好演员的典范——沉寂多年打磨演技后积累了足够的实力,并最终得到了大众的认可。作为励志的典范,他的人生经历让人动容:三年内被拒绝了800多次,直到47岁才红遍中国;他淡泊名利,因为角色理解或剧本质量上与合作方的分歧,他曾拒绝了众多演出邀约。对于我们平凡人,也可以从张颂文的经历中得到很多启示。很多人害怕被拒绝,害怕失败,但其实每个人都会经历这一过程,关键是要不放弃,坚持不懈地追寻自己的梦想。同时也要注重自己的内心,不要为了名利而失去自己的准则和良心。请就张颂文所经历的“双向拒绝”这一独特现象撰写一篇300-800词的评论文章,你可以根据自己的个人经验以及有效论据来阐释自己的论点和解释原因。
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截止日期:2023-05-31
答题人数:51
[作文号:2830781] 【四级周周练】Campus Safety(2023-03-24)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic: Campus Safety. Based on the Chinese outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.  1. 校园安全十分重要  2. 因此,学校应当…  3. 我们自己应当…
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截止日期:2023-04-21
答题人数:73
[作文号:2812128] 【四级周周练】Information Security(2023-03-03)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Information Security. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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截止日期:2023-03-31
答题人数:86
[作文号:2755905] [批改网杯]“Involution” for College Students(2022-11-09)
要求:题目:“Involution” for College Students要求:“Involution”, or rat race,  is one of the most popular internet buzz words in recent years. It means “Simple self-repetition”or“Irrational internal competition”. “Involution” is ubiquitous among college students. For example, some teachers set a 5000-word limit for course papers, but a few students can write more than 10,000 words. The national postgraduate entrance examination and national examination for admissions to the civil service are more competitive too.The number of applicants for the postgraduate entrance examination is increasing, exceeding 4 million for the first time in 2022. The number of candidates for 2021 Civil Service Exam is also increasing, with over 1.39 million qualified people trying to compete for only 25, 000 positions.Some say that rat race is a good thing, because it promotes a refined division of labour, so it is just a type of magnified anxiety. Others think that rat race is a vicious competition, causing internal strife and exhausting everyone involved, but with little to gain. Please write an essay (300-800 words) to analyze the reasons for “involution” among college students and discuss how to view this phenomenon and avoid falling into the trap of “involution”. You can use your own personal experience to support your views or explain the reasons.  参考译文:“内卷”是近年来最火的网络热词之一,其涵义是“简单的自我重复”或者“非理性的内部竞争”。内卷在大学生群体中无处不在。比如某些课程要求写5000字以内的论文,有人可以写到一万字以上。考研和考公也越来越“内卷”,2022年的考研报名人数首次突破400万。考公人数逐年增长,2021年国考计划招录2.5万人,最终通过资格审查的人数大约为139万...有人说内卷是好事,可以促使社会分工精细化,是被放大的焦虑,有人觉得内卷是恶性竞争,会造成内耗,让每个身处其中的人精疲力尽,还所得甚少。请写一篇300-800字的文章,分析大学生内卷现象形成的原因,谈谈如何正确看待“内卷”,并从“内卷”中脱身,你可以用自己的亲身经历佐证你的观点或解释原因。
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截止日期:2022-11-20
答题人数:23
[作文号:2746858] 【四级周周练】The Effects of New Media on The Way We Live(2022-11-01)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the effects of new media on the way we live. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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截止日期:2022-11-15
答题人数:89
[作文号:2719265] 20210601 Are people becoming addicted to technology?(2022-10-07)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay titled “Are people becoming addicted to technology?”. The statement given below is for your reference. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Numerous studies claim that addiction to technology is real and it has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction.
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截止日期:2022-10-28
答题人数:90
[作文号:2631000] 2021年6月第三套:科技是否让人懒惰?Is technology making people lazy?(2022-04-19)
要求:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay titled “Is technology making people lazy?”. The statement given below is for your reference. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.  Many studies claim that computers distract people, make them lazy thinkers and even lower their work efficiency.  
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截止日期:2022-05-09
答题人数:76
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